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Gam
Mar 22, 2010 21:31:52 GMT -6
Post by elitegam on Mar 22, 2010 21:31:52 GMT -6
nAME:gAM rACE:iRKEN sKIN:aVERAGE gREEN eYE coler:Glowing Blue aGE:14 unlike most irkens gam is blind Wears A Light Blue 125-m3--5--Power...Suit Most Of The Time But When He Isent Wearing It He Wears The Regualr Issue Uniform But Purple IS MOSTLY GLOOMY BECAUSE HES THE ONLY ONE HO ONLY SEES ALL dARKNESS AND TAKES IT OUT ON THE RACES HE TAKES OUT WILL ONLY BE HAPPY IF HE IS IN THE POWER SUIT BECAUSE IT LETS HIM SEE BUT.. IT IS ONLY DIGITAL IT ONLY GIVES HIM A IDEA OF WHAT ITS LIKE IN THE LIGHT AND OUT OF THE DARKNESS ALTHOUGH HE IS BLND IT GIVES HIM OTHER HIGHTEND SENCES SO TECHNICLY HE CAN TELL IF YOU ARE THERE. (The Helmet For The Power Suit Can Be Taken Off) (The Power Suit Is NOT A PEICE OF EQUIPMENT USED IN THE SERIES) (IT IS 50% MY CREATION MY COUSIN HELPED WITH IDEAS) Attachments:
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Gam
Mar 25, 2010 8:07:33 GMT -6
Post by Tak on Mar 25, 2010 8:07:33 GMT -6
Right, a few problems with this CR. Make it more presentable, cut out all the capitals, please fill out the character application that we have provided for you, what you have written here isn't what we have provided for you to fill out, so it would be best if you find the application that we have given, fill it out and re-post your CR.
So far, this is okay, but we would prefer it if you filled out the application that we have provided.
Thank you.
-Tak
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